Govind, has been patient with his words in verse
Generous, quietly motivating making muses traverse
In a canvas of feeling, and gratitude, this is immerse(d)(Cant even hold the rhyme consistently like he does!)
Many a verse, he gifts
And my spirit, it always lifts
Be it in humour, in jest
Or the topping, the crest
As it were, I sure have been blest
PRG, sometimes Govind he signs
His words, in verse, those lines
More precious than diamonds from mines 🙂
This wee bit of studied rhyme
All shoddy, but in good faith, and solid chryme
Is yours, Govind, and to keep-it’s not worth THAT dime 😀
And here’s the list of your gifts to this page
All of which this rambler has decided to cage
In here, as wisdom from a sage
No less, for me, as I guage
Gorge and deeply assuage
The arrogant muse within 🙂 🙂
(See, I cannot even keep up that shoddy rhyme
Now that is nothing less than a crime 🙂 )
Govind’s words on Writes Here :
PS : My feeble attempt inspired byPRG
Usha, just beautiful! ”
Welcome back.A`very apt verse for the occassion ”
Just beautiful Usha. Welcome back in case you have missed my comments for your earlier post.”
Usha just beautiful. We only wish we get more of this. ”
Welcome back. The wait was very much worth it. ”
Usha,need more of this ”
Usha simply wonderful. I was in Myanmar when I read this on my reader but couldn’t comment as we can’t access blogging sites there. ”
Very beautifully written Usha. ”
There isn’t a single deal or a relationship which is unconditional.
Simply Superb Usha. ”
“From the maturity of perfection in creation,Do we degenerate into the immaturity of a life?”. Usha very profound and how very true. I feel jealous at your ability to constantly come out with such gems.
a post I couldn’t but adore
though it is time for them to soar
your love and care they’ll never ignore.
Are their characters based on their zodiac signs. I would love to meet the Geminian for obvious reasons :))”
Beautiful. Just loved it, especially the pun with “Period” ”
Red with anger, green with envy, yellow with fear and purple with frustration. Beautiful. ”
Rain on more such poetry Ushs. ”
Thanks I learnt something new today teacher. 🙂
A paradox, into the past by forgetting the past.
And finally I could resist. Paul Mcartney’s YESTERDAY.
Usha just wonderful. Hope you will get more time to write such soul stirring verse. ”
Usha, beautiful verse. ”
I was reminded of this song when I read your verse.
Thank you for painstakingly putting my comments in a chain,
though to be witty, wise and clever they try to feign,
like the mushrooms that come with the rain,
what I write was also dull and so plain,
but as the string by the flowers they tie, fragrance attain
so too my drab verses in the bargain
of being in your blog, immortality gain
For letting me encroach upon your domain
I have to thank you again and again.”
it perhaps lets it to be more brighter
for definitely a little more longerthan if it were to detach and wither.
“Living is easy with eyes closed, misunderstanding all you see.
It’s getting hard to be someone but it all works out.
It doesn’t matter much to me.
Always know sometimes think it’s me,
but you know I know and it’s a dream.
I think I know of thee, ah yes, but it’s all wrong.
That is I think I disagree.
‘The Beatles’-“Strawberry Fields Forever””
and be careful when you air your views
for we don’t know who might peruse
and understand that it is an abuse
then there are the appraisals and reviews.
I guess an equally erratic rant.”
when from your grace did I fall?
All I remember are the times that did enthrall
when did our love run into the wall?
please tell me, for your call wait I shall.”
save me from these
I long for some peace
and in you me sees
a cure for my disease.
Hopelessness and hope in a single verse.A wave that tries to drown you also brings you up for some fresh breath. Beautiful.
Like a lovely rose cleansed with the dew,
another year comes all bright and new
Let happiness and joy be with you all through,
and may whatever you strive to do,
make your mother proud for having a son like you.
A belated birthday wish comes your way. As I once told your mother, maybe I am 363 days ahead to wish you for your next birthday. Hope you had a good one.
A mother like Usha there are only a few
and all I can say is ‘Lucky You’
As you start another phase of life anew
I wish you happiness through and through.
that binds the beggar and the Pope.
People lose it and in darkness grope
and some who are unable to cope
go searching for some magic dope
or go scurrying for the rope.
Don’t worry, all that seems lost will come back- HOPE.
We should have a silly rant contest.
if you imply that your readers are a pain in the neck
if you did you have made my ego a wreck
what was once bloated is now just a speck.
are perhaps eyes at the back
then we could tighten things that are slack
correct course and move to right track
and at life have a fresh new crack.
and what of the pain, am I missing anything at all?
To be alright soon pray I shall
to get up and give us more verses that enthral.
All the unwanted things we can remove from our gene
and from all those undesirable habits,we oourselves can wean
Oh, once again a case of ‘if only it had been….’
that it has no limits
in the language that it admits
nor does it need any affidavits
or require you to reveal your deficits
as without any sound it visits
not waiting for any permits.
Beautiful as usual. Can you throw more light on Aleph?
may joy and health you have in excess
sadness and troubles a little less
with many more years of happiness
to you,let the ALMIGHTY bless.
Happy Birthday Sashu. Have a great day and a wonderful year ahead 🙂
a mind that works on its own is mine
and so you want catch me whine
to be me it suits me just fine.
from hatred it sets me free
peace in this earth to be
I have written something on these lines.But not as crisp as you have. Don’t know if you had read it.
though unbounded love is rife
focus is always on the strife
over flowers the choice is knife.
When really will we understand life?
“when mirrored hearts unable to take the screaming pitch of untold grief simply shattered……”
and take away be it meek or vain
surely it doesn’t have much to gain
than give support for this terrain
dying,unable to immortality sustain
Death!Can we really arraign?
It sounds so cool and so soothing
you know you don’t have to go fishing
Into the bucket they are ready to be jumping!
Great work teacher! 🙂
to negate the familiarity caused contempt?
If so you shouldn’t voice them and tempt
the adversary and make him ready for a preempt.
Took the bait. Your diction gives me a complex.
there’s nothing that is not needed
and for it to go unimpeded
nothing should go unheeded.
Beautiful. Especially liked ‘In gleams of warmth
Like embers coated in ash
That, with breaths of love
Glow, in anticipation.’
Conjured up a beautiful imagery.
and remember not to be too stiff and taut.
Love and respect they say can’t be bought,
the way your wards HAVE you, they must love you a lot.
52??? Usha you deserve a Param Vir Chakra. 🙂
is so beautifully compiled
though the world looks so bad & wild
the way you want,life, can be styled.
Ashwin, all the best to you
and to the mother too. 🙂
to express one’s thoughts
with just sixteen words
No foreplay,no afterplay.