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Raindrop – Haiku :)

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A big pearly drop!

Plop! It falls deep into my thoughts

Rippling into words!


6 July, 2010
(Online 🙂 🙂 )
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Syllable count 🙂

A /big /pear/ly /drop – 5

Plop! /It/ falls /deep/ in/to /my /thoughts – 7

Ripp/ling in/to /words! – 5

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Author: Usha Pisharody

A rambler, pretends to be a teacher, loves to dream, and go on Quixotic Quests in the Realm of Romance With Life...

11 thoughts on “Raindrop – Haiku :)”

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  1. Govind
    July 6, 2010 at 2:49 pm

    Like a ripple turns into a wave,about your Haiku I can only raveHow do you make the words behaveas if they are your own slave?Simply Superb Usha.

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  2. Usha Pisharody
    July 6, 2010 at 4:09 pm

    Govind, I have your comment in my inbox 🙂 Thanks so much. I did publish it, but blogger seems to have swallowed it whole, and refuses to let me re-publish!Lol!Thanks so much. Will copy paste it here, in case blogger still refuses, a bit later.

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  3. Soumya
    July 6, 2010 at 4:15 pm

    Lovely. This haiku category is made special by you, everytime you pen one. Plop! I like that. Adds so much of a visualizing effect.

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  4. adorablesashu
    July 6, 2010 at 4:22 pm

    Lovely as ever! Such an apt pic too!! 🙂

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  5. Usha Pisharody
    July 6, 2010 at 4:42 pm

    Govind, there it is finally… Thank you :)Soumya 🙂 🙂 Relieved that blogger is behaving itself, and letting me share your words too! Thanks!Sash… 🙂 Yours too! Thank you so very much 🙂 🙂

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  7. Shail
    July 6, 2010 at 5:40 pm

    Oh this is lovely, especially the 'plop it falls into my thoughts'! I almost heard that!!! 😀

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  8. Shail
    July 6, 2010 at 5:42 pm

    hey! Where did my comment go?? :O

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  9. Usha Pisharody
    July 6, 2010 at 6:03 pm

    Shail… I was taking a walk up a little hillside in a mild drizzle; walking with my mother up to a temple there 🙂 And plop a big raindrop fell of a leaf into a puddle on the way :DCouldn't not capture that 🙂 :)Thank you!

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  10. Usha Pisharody
    July 6, 2010 at 6:38 pm

    Aayushi 🙂 Thanks to you too 🙂

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