The invitation was clear
In that look we shared;
And mesmerized, we made
That Deal.
And yes, we were, and have been
And still are, all that we could be…
But to each other?
That look, we look, yet again, for it
Hoping against hope…
For when we scripted,
While we enacted…
We overlooked the line
Between lines…
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Mind over matter
When you look out, what do you see?
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and sometimes trying on new ones for fit (and looks)
Tigers not daughters
Vanity, On A Royal Scale
The world through my lens.....
To Share... To Love... What better way than words
One Step at a Time
All that remains.
Birding in south India and life on planet earth
... because a day just isn't enough.
Comics, Cartoons, Writings.
Malayalam mini-series
Learning something new every day.
is what I want my life to be about.
Ponders that I ponder along Pondering Lane
Need I say more?
I joined this crazy tribe when I married into the Indian Army
An eccentric rambler on life's lessons and mercies, found and lost... :)
Where fingers tap dance...
Smile! It doesn't cost a penny
DISSENT, DEBATE, CREATE
I live in words
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June 20, 2010 at 8:12 am
for a moment I thought you were writing for your anniversary !!! then suddenly I felt you are writing for some scheme in which you have been tricked… !!! lol… what was it about… its not nonsense… atleast it intrigues… !!! 🙂
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June 20, 2010 at 8:24 am
I like this:”We overlooked the lineBetween lines…”
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June 20, 2010 at 8:26 am
Hitchy… LOL! or rather that comment is making me ROFL :D!!Thanks… for reading that absurdity, and trying to make sense of it 😀 Let's just say it's a slice of senselessness, that desperately wanted out, from my clutch :D!Thanks again!
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June 20, 2010 at 8:34 am
Aayushi, thank you 🙂
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June 20, 2010 at 12:57 pm
🙂
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June 20, 2010 at 7:04 pm
There wasn't a slightest hintand we can't lodge a complaintfor we haven't read the fine printno siree we didn't.There isn't a single deal or a relationship which is unconditional.
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June 21, 2010 at 1:51 am
Sash… 🙂 to you too 🙂 Thanks!Govind, perfect understanding, as usual 🙂 Thank you so much!
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June 21, 2010 at 5:51 am
But to each other?That look, we look, yet again, for itHoping against hope…Such a clever construction. LOVE the way you have kept it so direct yet with so less space. I like Govind's comment. It fits the poetry perfectly.Another sweet little gem of truth.
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June 21, 2010 at 4:54 pm
Soumya… 🙂 🙂 Thank you Kind Sir 🙂 Loved your note too!
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June 26, 2010 at 1:23 pm
Good one Usha!!!Agree with Govind's comment above!!
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July 2, 2010 at 5:54 am
Stumped once again Usha, by your words……For when we scripted,While we enacted…We overlooked the lineBetween lines…So beautifully said…As for me Usha, as the years go by..I cannot see the lines, I could read between…..good one indeed Usha.
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