A Quest on Overdrive … :)

An eccentric rambler on life's lessons and mercies, found and lost… :)

Life… less

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If life this be…
Endless yet tunnelled
Into a claustrophobic
Vortex of existence;

Am I?
Or better yet…

Will I ever be?

The cranium floods
With nerve ends tingling
Arcs over synapses
Tingling
Tingling…

Terrifying me.

Life, I must admit
Shall be
My undoing.

Online, on a silly line of thought 🙂
13 September, 2009

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Author: Usha Pisharody

A rambler, pretends to be a teacher, loves to dream, and go on Quixotic Quests in the Realm of Romance With Life...

16 thoughts on “Life… less

  1. Now where do you get such poetry from in your cranium???The cranium floodsWith nerve ends tinglingArcs over synapsesTinglingTingling..

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  2. WOW! That was a revelation…:)Enjoyed reading the hidden depth of the verses and what your heart spoke today!!!Keep writing, coz' you are amazing at what you do…:)

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  3. IHM, lol :D! Beats me too :)Thanks for the note :)Fiducia , thank you too. I must admit that i have nothing to do with what I write… a mere conduit, that is all I am 🙂 Thank you again!

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  4. Am speech…. less!Maybe I tend to repeat myself, but I can never come close to match the things leave in my mind to the words I write as comments!Keep posting!

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  5. Prabhu, thank you for giving speech to those thoughts too 🙂

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  6. Anything I say would be considered redundant!Glad to see you post after a long time 🙂

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  7. We'd always love your cranium floodingwith thoughts that are so very dazzlingand arcs over synapses forming lightningIt is you that should be threatening.Usha just beautiful. We only wish we get more of this.

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  8. Very interesting!esp the last lines… they make me phrase the phrase, “Patriotically in Love!” … stupid, i know…anyway… keep inking!

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  9. That was brilliant.one of your best.Mystic and surreal.i just loved ittake care

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  10. “Maut ne hamko bakhsha hai lekin ,Zindagee ke Sataye huye hain””While the death has pardoned me,It is the Life that has tortured”

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  11. Life is just a phase you're going through…you'll get over it 😉

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  12. Life, I must admitShall beMy undoing.I stopped here.. Felt an inexplicable surge deep in. Amazing write.Luckily I found your blog, next to mine… Template similarity surprised me slightly and then the verse “shook” me.

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  13. missed this Ushus…missing you more…terribly infact…come back please…as and when you can….who else will write words like these?((((((((((((((hugs))))))))))))))a wealth of meaning and a lifetime of experince in these lines Ushus…love you dear dear Ushus:)

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