The beautiful rose
Tall, vain, proud- but now slain, lies
Picture-perfect on
The coffin of her mistress,
Whose hand fed that vanity!
Death waits and smiles in
Irony – the lovely rose
Tall and proud, now his
Prize: another soul to take
Away – unexpected Gift!
30 April, ‘07
(Pictures from : scholez18.blogspot.com ; http://www.guardian.co.uk)
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(I read this beautiful poem by Somkritya, here, which made me want to repost this tanka, from a collection of them posted way back, called Tantalizing Tanka :D)
[As you know by now, 🙂 ] A Haiku works with 17 syllables arranged in 3 lines of 5/7/5 syllables to each line, and evokes an aspect of nature and the seasons, with the last line holding the punch so to speak.
Tanka on the other hand gives the writer more space to work with – 31 syllables, arranged in 5 lines of 5/7/5/7/7 syllables each. Tanka is an older form of the lyric in Japanese… dating to 13 centuries ago, while Haiku is just about 3 centuries ago..Tanka was mainly written between lovers, as society had accepted the fact that a man’s dallying with another woman, other than his wife was normal!! After the man departed early in the morning, he would send a Tanka to his lady love with his message of love..
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December 3, 2011 at 5:09 pm
Death waits to be born againand take away be it meek or vainsurely it doesn't have much to gainthan give support for this terraindying,unable to immortality sustainDeath!Can we really arraign?
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December 15, 2011 at 6:02 pm
Just catching up on the ones I missed these past few days. The analysis and the extension of the Tanka is superlative, Govind! Salutes!
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