Hi, I murmur.
Hmmmm, you softly groan.
Had a good day? I ask.
It’s better now, you assure me.
Ahan? I tease, Why is that?
You know! He chuckles.
Not really! I prevaricate, Tell me, na!
Mmmm, just that quiet note, smilingly.
Well? I persist, childlike.
For this is no less a game
A Hide-and-seek of utterance!
You’re there, I’m here.
But today, I’m e e cummings
And I carry your heart in me!
Purr-feckt, I say.
And yet, I add
And yet, he picks it up
The day can get better
If you’ll just open the door!
What else is left to say?
But
Touché
🙂
5 April, 2015
Day#5 of #NaPoWriMo 🙂
Touché is a favourite word that I don’t use enough 🙂
e.e.cummings is poet extraordinaire, and one of my personal favourites is his “i carry your heart with me…” poem
April 6, 2015 at 12:56 am
A poem titled ‘Touche’
Is our quota for today
For compliments she fishes
For open doors he wishes
And Cummings takes her heart away!
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April 6, 2015 at 10:36 pm
Gulshan ❤ I'm going to run out of words and ways to thank you! But. Thank you so very much!
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April 6, 2015 at 4:10 pm
Just wanted to say, “i carry your heart……” is one of my favourites too! A love poem, where its freshness lies not only in its message, but also its quirky punctuation…..:)
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April 7, 2015 at 9:08 am
That is a beautiful summing up of cummings’ verse, Malavika! Thank you!
P.S. Why don’t you add your blog url to the website you are asked for when you write in the comment? Or log into WordPress, and then comment with your WordPress id 🙂 Would love for others to discover your blog, as and when you update it 🙂
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April 8, 2015 at 9:50 pm
Whoosh this just blew me away
and to this excellent word play,
What else can I say?
except maybe….. touché.
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April 8, 2015 at 9:52 pm
So, again, it is MY turn to say it again – touché 😀
Thank you Govind!
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