A Quest on Overdrive … :)

An eccentric rambler on life's lessons and mercies, found and lost… :)


Belonging – Tanka

Yester-eve, holding 

You close, I wept for our love

Threadbare, its edges?

But gently, keeping me close

You wove those threads, back to us!

4 April, 2015

Tanka – Japanese lyric form, 5 lines, syllable break-up – 5/7/5/7/7 🙂 More Tanka (LINK) to understand how it works, read up links from ahapoetry , a valuable reference page 🙂 Tips and techniques also given there 🙂