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An eccentric rambler on life's lessons and mercies, found and lost… :)

A Predictable Surprise!

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Got you there!
You say, when you call!

And I….
I can hear
the sound of the
gentle twinkle in your eye-
When you tease me so…

I can see the smile
slipping down from
your eyes- and
leaving your lips in
the light laughter!

Mmmm… and I can
literally taste
the warmth of your look-
The slow fire burning,
Lit by the love that
holds us together!

Each moment of
Our togetherness,
Is such a
Certain, Predictable,
Pleasant, Loving Surprise!

16 December, ’07

Valentine’s Day is tomorrow 🙂 Come unleash love, to make the world a better place, a non violent place and a place where we can reclaim the choice to live, not just exist 🙂 🙂

Solilo🙂 Thanks for the prompt 🙂 Am keeping the faith.. 6th post.. 🙂

A bit more mush here “Winsome Wiles” 🙂 🙂

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Author: Usha Pisharody

A rambler, pretends to be a teacher, loves to dream, and go on Quixotic Quests in the Realm of Romance With Life...

16 thoughts on “A Predictable Surprise!

  1. Usha, Thanks again. I have saved some of your poems. I love these lines..”Each moment ofOur togetherness,Is such aCertain, Predictable,Pleasant, Loving Surprise!”So true for my other half and me.

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  2. ummm u make me wanna get married 😀 if only i can share such moments.. 🙂

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  3. Solilo, 🙂 That is good to hear too.. 🙂 Advance wishes for the Big Day 🙂 Crossing my fingers that the protests all over are successful. thanks for the lovely words too!Meena 🙂 🙂 Good 🙂 Marriage is a good thing actually. So thanks for the vote, 🙂

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  4. ”Mmmm… and I canliterally tastethe warmth of your look-The slow fire burning,Lit by the love thatholds us together”Passion…and loads of it..:)”Valentine’s Day is tomorrow 🙂 Come unleash love, to make the world a better place, a non violent place and a place where we can reclaim the choice to live, not just exist 🙂 :)”yes,beautifully said..reclaim the choice to live…and not just exist…hoping and praying…

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  5. hmmmm its soothing reading this…. lets unleash the love … yea….

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  6. Wow! Awesome synesthesia! Perhaps we can await other figures of speech too 😀

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  7. Indyeah, Meg, lol… getting a bit hot under the collar eh? 😀 :D! Nopes, Just getting across some much needed love into the air 🙂 Thanks for the awesome comments as well.. :)Dhiren, lol, yes.. 🙂 Thaanks.. :)Roopa, now now.. there are no new figures of speech.. though I am trying to figure out how to make a speech for love, for tomorrow, for Overdrive.. :)Thanks for the warm warm words too 🙂

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  8. I have finally done your tag on “holding hands” :). Check it out when you get time 😀

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  9. “Certain, Predictable, Pleasant, Loving Surprise!” … makes me feel there’s certain ‘nevergonnahappen’ part2 somewhere!

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  10. Things that make life beautiful :)just the way the poem depictsBeauty !

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  11. Oh just came to say that the previous comment as zoominhing was me 😛

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  12. Roopa, read it 🙂 Awed! Just that! :)Thank you so very much!Sanket, lol, no second part unfortunately :)Thanks for the visit and the read :)Shalu, ok 🙂 Thanks for both those comments, and for the sweetness of those words, as always!

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  13. Predictability is such a comfort sometimes….very beautifully expressed Usha

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  14. … And you did it again… 🙂 :)Exquisite flow! Loved it…Peace.

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  15. I can see the smileslipping down fromyour eyes- andleaving your lips inthe light laughter!these lines actually slipped inside like the laughter from one’s eyes. so beautiful.. feels like drowning myself in these words

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  16. Mithe, thank you.. as always, for getting to the writes with sweet words!Karthik.. 🙂 🙂 Many thanks!Meenakshi [If I may :)], thank you so very very much!

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