A Quest on Overdrive … :)

An eccentric rambler on life's lessons and mercies, found and lost… :)

Loosing It


Splendrous was that moment
Of an eon ago,
When our paths met
Our eyes talked
And our souls merged!

Enmeshed in the million
Thoughts, fragrances, memories
Words and gestures,
We cocooned ourselves
Strand by strand-
Tightly. Securely. Completely.

And yet, Now.
The strand’s end hangs loose.

There is a constriction,
Uneasiness, of impending
Loosing the strand.

I wish we weren’t
Loosing it,

Losing it.

Usha, 10 March, ’08

Author: Usha Pisharody

A rambler, pretends to be a teacher, loves to dream, and go on Quixotic Quests in the Realm of Romance With Life...

3 thoughts on “Loosing It

  1. some great lines in der!!!!loosing n losin it! 🙂 liked dat wordplay!!!


  2. hmmmmm, takes the breath away with that line.. losing it losing it !!!


  3. speaks volumes … this write … it does!!! how love binds so closely and snugly … and how the instincts clamour at the hint of the closeness departing …. desparation and memories are so obvious in this …. and the pain and wishes so evident in the lines:i wish we weren’t loosing it and losing it!!


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