That cloud burst.
Aeons worth of vagrant
Intangible, angst-ridden
Thoughts, condensed
On knots of pain.
The dam burst.
Brimming over,
Churning, pushing
Through
Them angst-ridden emotions.
Washed away.
Submerged.
Fighting, to hold on.
Till I finally
Said.
Or did they?
Let go.
LET GO.
I did.
Rootless, wild
Thrashing, calming.
I let go.
And just like I knew.
I was finished…
21 September, 2016
September 21, 2016 at 6:22 pm
To finish, one needs to let go. Gulp in the air! 😉
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September 21, 2016 at 6:29 pm
Thank you Shail! *Gulp gulp*
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September 21, 2016 at 11:54 pm
Before you began to finish the gasp
Perhaps you needed to unpin the hasp
Then let go
And from that low
Broke free from a cloying annoying clasp!
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September 22, 2016 at 12:42 pm
Gasping big .. gulping big..makes lungs stronger. .
And with strong big lungs we can puff out air to help someone.. …
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October 11, 2016 at 1:59 pm
Every thing in the nature is following the rule of Recycling. We finish off to have a new start. We let it go because we want to create space for other things to come in and fill the vacuum. The journey never ends in reality!
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October 15, 2016 at 10:54 am
It takes a lot of courage to let go
and simply go with the flow
than clinging and unwilling to throw
garbage collected from long ago
I would have preferred i was renewed instead of i was finished, but like Shail would say, it is my perspective 🙂
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