The open doorway beckons
My heart, it recognizes and surrenders!
Why did it call, so?
And why did my heart answer?
Fleetingly, I wonder, yet again-
I knew, didn’t I? All along…
I knew we’d touch that emotion-
Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-
Together, the same instant
At that open doorway, between our hearts
Merging and mingling
Suffused with the warmth
Awash with the tingling tenderness-
That only the silent succor of love gifts.
Goosebumps!
A precious moment.
Existence ended then.
And life began…
6 August, 2008
August 7, 2008 at 12:38 pm
almost a de javu feelin wi diz one!! n knowin you, itz no surprise!! loved it..trulyyyyy! 🙂
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August 15, 2008 at 4:02 pm
Goosebumps!here too ma’am..Beautifully put across..I knew we’d touch that emotion-Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-Together, the same instantAt that open doorway, between our heartsMerging and minglingSuffused with the warmthAwash with the tingling tenderness-That only the silent succor of love gifts.Loved these lines to the core ma’am..!!Thirst quenching write..Fabulous!!
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August 19, 2008 at 3:00 am
Smooth and suspenseful, as descriptive and alluring as ever.P.s. I also like the “one-post-a-page” idea, it focuses the attention of the reader.Long time no read 😀
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August 21, 2008 at 3:51 pm
it took some time for me ..read it again..”Indescribable, but, oh so tangible”yes.Beautiful MIPfor a change, i have postd something different..
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September 21, 2008 at 9:21 am
Sash… i know:) thank you too!Bharath, thank you for connecting with this one!Aareet, thanks:) its a pleasure to hear from you too!MIP, thanks; have been catching up with the multifaceted artist that you are:)
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October 12, 2008 at 9:43 am
complete contrast to “will you listen”…ha ha…loving every moment..every emotion…every post…its like a roller coaster..he he..
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October 12, 2008 at 12:44 pm
And I certainly am enjoying every comment you have posted in here this day!!!Indebted, for your time, and your words, shared here:) Thank you!!
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February 15, 2009 at 10:53 am
and now I reach here after itching to write when I first saw this and not having the time..:)”A precious moment.Existence ended then.And life began…”how do you write these?how?As winnie says,makes one yearn for all of it….
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February 20, 2009 at 7:04 pm
Meg 🙂 🙂 Replete, for now 🙂
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