A Quest on Overdrive … :)

An eccentric rambler on life's lessons and mercies, found and lost… :)

The Moment

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The open doorway beckons
My heart, it recognizes and surrenders!

Why did it call, so?
And why did my heart answer?

Fleetingly, I wonder, yet again-
I knew, didn’t I? All along…

I knew we’d touch that emotion-
Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-
Together, the same instant
At that open doorway, between our hearts

Merging and mingling
Suffused with the warmth
Awash with the tingling tenderness-
That only the silent succor of love gifts.

Goosebumps!

A precious moment.
Existence ended then.
And life began…

6 August, 2008

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Author: Usha Pisharody

A rambler, pretends to be a teacher, loves to dream, and go on Quixotic Quests in the Realm of Romance With Life...

9 thoughts on “The Moment

  1. almost a de javu feelin wi diz one!! n knowin you, itz no surprise!! loved it..trulyyyyy! 🙂

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  2. Goosebumps!here too ma’am..Beautifully put across..I knew we’d touch that emotion-Indescribable, but, oh so tangible-Together, the same instantAt that open doorway, between our heartsMerging and minglingSuffused with the warmthAwash with the tingling tenderness-That only the silent succor of love gifts.Loved these lines to the core ma’am..!!Thirst quenching write..Fabulous!!

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  3. Smooth and suspenseful, as descriptive and alluring as ever.P.s. I also like the “one-post-a-page” idea, it focuses the attention of the reader.Long time no read 😀

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  4. it took some time for me ..read it again..”Indescribable, but, oh so tangible”yes.Beautiful MIPfor a change, i have postd something different..

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  5. Sash… i know:) thank you too!Bharath, thank you for connecting with this one!Aareet, thanks:) its a pleasure to hear from you too!MIP, thanks; have been catching up with the multifaceted artist that you are:)

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  6. complete contrast to “will you listen”…ha ha…loving every moment..every emotion…every post…its like a roller coaster..he he..

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  7. And I certainly am enjoying every comment you have posted in here this day!!!Indebted, for your time, and your words, shared here:) Thank you!!

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  8. and now I reach here after itching to write when I first saw this and not having the time..:)”A precious moment.Existence ended then.And life began…”how do you write these?how?As winnie says,makes one yearn for all of it….

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  9. Meg 🙂 🙂 Replete, for now 🙂

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