To the rapt fifty, that day
(Or was it forty-eight?)
I ranted.
When I rant
They need to be rapt!
Or else… 😛
The ogre, you see, is at work!
I, as usual, on my soapbox-
About clichés –
In speeches, in essays
In letters, in e-mails
They’d need to write
For me to evaluate.
Class Eight.
Writing tasks 😀
Now you’d be a-thinking-
This here lady’s really
Got a nut loose.
Clichés, and Class Eight?
Well, yes. I did.
They listened. They giggled.
I swear I even heard some snorting too! 😛
In the next fifteen minutes
I had to be done. Just in time I did.
They were saved, by the bell! 😛
And so, I forgot, as I suppose, they did too.
Till.
Ta-da! Surprise!
Exams time, and papers galore
(That, incidentally, is where I’m at 😛 )
Some neat, some spidery
Some short, some too darned lengthy!
Some diatribes, some earnest
Some irreverent, some irascible
And some – God help me!
To wake me from the stupor
of the overdose of the work-
For, I spy …
Cliché.! I jump. I cheer.
I look again. Ooooh yes!
Right along there – c l i c h e’
That dashing tiny accent too, to boot!
I have never been more blessed! 😛
Never mind that the child wrote:
I quote:
“It’s a cliché to say speeches like this”
Unquote
About the topic; and put me well in my place!
I do this fist pumping grunt of satisfaction.
I accept that criticism.
And I do that clichéd thingy.
I write a ramble.
This a-way.
Clichés are good.
😆
23 March, 2013.
A ‘eureka’ moment 😀
March 23, 2013 at 10:24 pm
:LOL!
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March 23, 2013 at 10:26 pm
OMG. Soumya that was fast 😀
Thank you for that 😆 LOL!
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March 23, 2013 at 11:22 pm
Haha!
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March 27, 2013 at 5:29 pm
😀 Thanks for sharing the laughter there, Shail!
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March 24, 2013 at 1:10 am
Brace kid 😀
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March 27, 2013 at 5:29 pm
:D! Why ‘Brace’? Thanks for the grin Hrishi 🙂
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March 27, 2013 at 9:10 pm
Ayyo.. I meant brave..
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March 27, 2013 at 10:06 pm
Gottit 😀
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March 24, 2013 at 10:21 am
😀 Your kids must be having a lot of fun with you as their teacher 😀
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March 27, 2013 at 5:30 pm
I’m not too sure about that Aayushi! They’d beg to differ 😀 The thing is I’m suddenly having fun 😀
Thank you for the sweet words!
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March 24, 2013 at 11:37 pm
lol that was fun
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March 27, 2013 at 5:31 pm
Soma, thank you! Though, in your hands those cliches would have jumped and squealed and pranced about in abandon 🙂
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March 27, 2013 at 5:17 pm
Lol yes cliches are lovely. And echoing Aayushi’s comment, you must be a fun teacher!
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March 27, 2013 at 5:32 pm
Cris, thank you 🙂 I shall allow my reply to Aayushi to speak for the fun I am having 🙂
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March 27, 2013 at 6:59 pm
Hi,
What jumped out at me are these lines,
“When I rant
They need to be rapt!
Or else…
The ogre, you see, is at work!”
Is this about you or them? And if it is about you, what is your motivation to hold a rod of fear over them? Would this strategy serve?
Shakti
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March 27, 2013 at 10:15 pm
Hi Shatkti, and welcome to this space. Glad that you did stop by to share your thoughts, which are very thought-provoking, for a cliched write like this one!
The intent was simply a tongue-in-cheek look at the title word itself, which I did not think would impact the young minds, and the surprise when I found the word on a paper put in serious context brought about what I’d hoped was a fun – making fun of myself more like – ramble. 🙂 Just that.
So, to answer your questions, which I am at this moment, as the rambler, obliged to, and indeed want to – for me, it’s about both, and the ogre part is a dig at myself. I do call myself this – and since Shrek happened, ogres aren’t all that bad 🙂 And no, they are not rapt listeners; a few lines down, you’d have read that! No, fear never works as motivation, except when it is what drives them in that utter last minute dash to save themselves!
Thank you for the weight you lend this write with your questions, and your perspective.
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March 28, 2013 at 3:41 pm
Thinking lady..beautiful poem::)
Vishal
http://www.vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com
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March 29, 2013 at 10:41 pm
Vishal, thank you!
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March 28, 2013 at 5:58 pm
Hahaha!! Made me miss GGG, I dunno why!! 😀
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March 29, 2013 at 10:42 pm
Sashu… LOL. Those were real fun days, weren’t they? the GGGs were awesome!
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April 2, 2013 at 11:56 am
haha! 😀 😛
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April 29, 2013 at 7:19 pm
Meggie… 😛 Thanks for the laughter 🙂
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April 21, 2013 at 6:57 pm
Guess you had a field day
that there was at least one who could say
that it is child’s play
to be using a cliche’
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April 29, 2013 at 7:20 pm
Love these lines too. When you shared it via chat, it really made me smile even more 🙂 How the children teach us is what I learnt 🙂 Hats offf to him, and to you too, for getting to that nitty gritty! Thank you Govind!
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May 15, 2013 at 9:16 pm
There you go again… i don’t mind being bombarded with cliches at this rate 😀
Hope you had fun with the papers 😀
Was amazing fun reading this!
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