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Belonging – Tanka

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Yester-eve, holding 

You close, I wept for our love

Threadbare, its edges?

But gently, keeping me close

You wove those threads, back to us!

4 April, 2015

Tanka – Japanese lyric form, 5 lines, syllable break-up – 5/7/5/7/7 🙂 More Tanka (LINK) to understand how it works, read up links from ahapoetry , a valuable reference page 🙂 Tips and techniques also given there 🙂

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Author: Usha Pisharody

A rambler, pretends to be a teacher, loves to dream, and go on Quixotic Quests in the Realm of Romance With Life...

11 thoughts on “Belonging – Tanka

  1. Coincidentally, ‘tanka’ means a stitch in Hindi/Marathi/Gujrati. And here you talk about threads and weaving 🙂 It is such a wonderful serendipity.

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  2. The tender touch
    The heart doth clutch
    Gently enfolds
    In arms holds
    Me likes much!

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    • Making Gulshan like much
      For all she gives here, with her gentle touch
      Is this rambler’s mission
      To create that frission*
      So that, her heart, and hers too, she doth cluth 🙂 🙂
      Pliss to note: (*French word not English 😛 )

      Thank you Gulshan! ❤

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  3. What a pretty form of poetry! Perfectly woven. 🙂

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  4. A neat stitch in time
    is what is always needed,
    but we miss the head
    and then try to catch the tail.
    But all is well that ends well.
    🙂 😉 🙂

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